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Cerro Panizos[edit]
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- Nominator(s): Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 07:12, 16 May 2024 (UTC)
This article is about a not-quite shield volcano in Argentina. It is not a particularly remarkable volcano, other than the fact that it was discovered from space imagery and that it is a large volcano in the wider Altiplano-Puna volcanic complex. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 07:12, 16 May 2024 (UTC)
Image review
- File:LandsatLook_Viewer_Cerro_Panizos_ignimbrite_shield.png: source link is dead. Nikkimaria (talk) 05:15, 18 May 2024 (UTC)
- Replaced link, although I don't remember which options I chose on the webpage to find the image. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 06:07, 18 May 2024 (UTC)
Comments from Z1720[edit]
Non-expert prose review.
- No concerns about the prose. I made minor edits to the article: feel free to revert.
- In the "Sources", Mazzoni, Mario M. (1989) and Vaquer, José María; Eguia, Luciana; Carreras, Jesica (2018) have titles in all caps, which per MOS:ALLCAPS should be in sentence case.
- Done. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 06:40, 25 May 2024 (UTC)
- Infobox checked and no concerns.
Lede check:
- "Subduction of the Nazca Plate beneath the South American Plate" is said in the lede, but I think the article body says that the subduction is under South America, with no mention of it being a plate. Should this be more explicit in the body, maybe wikilinked in the body?
- Put "South America" instead. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 06:40, 25 May 2024 (UTC)
- In the lede: "The formation of the APVC has been linked to the existence of a giant magmatic body in the crust of the Andes." From what I gather from the body, this magmatic body is the Altiplano-Puna Magma Body. Should this be wikilinked in the lede? And should the lede specify that the body is in the Central Andies (and not underneath the whole thing?)
- Implemented. Jo-Jo Eumerus (talk) 06:40, 25 May 2024 (UTC)
Those are my comments. Please ping when the above are addressed. Z1720 (talk) 01:18, 25 May 2024 (UTC)