Talk:Porphyrius the Charioteer

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There is a lot of really interesting information that is very well laid out, however, I don’t think that it is necessary for you to have “the Blues and Greens” subsection. It would be easier to read if you had those couple sentences be part of the “A Great Charioteer” section instead. Also, it might be a good idea to put a caption for the image that you have up because it is not clear what that is. Dshabeeb 23:48, 14 May 2007 (UTC) Dana Shabeeb[reply]

Very nice article. It would be nice if you put in hyperlinks to places/people that you reference in your article. The extra information gained from this would help give more context to the story. You might elaborate on Vitalian's revolt and Porhyrius' role in that. And I agree with Dana that the picture would benefit from a caption. 67.176.177.227 02:57, 15 May 2007 (UTC)Ross Devor[reply]

good information, and its well organized. i like the picture. See if you can link your references to the places in the article you used them (footnotes?) so we know how the references relate to your article. You mention that he was very talented at a young age, and you also mention his age with respect to antioch pogrom and the revolt. do you know how old he was when he began charioteering? finally, i don't exactly understand where he did his charioteering, was it in Rome, or Antioch, Libya? Did he travel to many places? if you have that info, i'd try to include it. Crd632 22:44, 15 May 2007 (UTC)[reply]

Very well written; you could have linked to other pages and your sources slightly better.76.16.233.199 03:09, 7 June 2007 (UTC)Anise K. Strong[reply]

Duplicate article redirected here[edit]

I redirected Porphyrius the Charioteer (capital C) to this article. If anyone wants to collect and merge information from that article, the latest version before the redirect is here. Shalom ^Hello 15:07, 6 July 2007 (UTC)[reply]