Talk:Crimean campaign (1646)

Rewriting the article.[edit]

i rewrote the article in order to avoid copyright issues you can find my edited article here [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Crimean_campaign_(1646)&diff=prev&oldid=1176666040]

Let me know if there's any issues. Regards. عبدالرحمن4132 (talk) 06:09, 23 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

You are still essentially presenting the same ideas in the same order using very similar wording. It's too closely paraphrased. Please describe the events in your own words, — Diannaa (talk) 11:06, 23 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]

https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Crimean_campaign_(1646)&diff=prev&oldid=1177213124

i have written the article again, let me know what you think. Regards. عبدالرحمن4132 (talk) 18:30, 26 September 2023 (UTC)[reply]