Talk:Callan Method Group

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Hi, can I suggest the following small changes which will make the page more factually correct and in my opinion read better without changing the fabric of the article.

1) Under Callan Method Group The Callan Method Group is a organization that teaches English and Spanish

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The Callan Method Group is an organisation that supports the teaching of English and Spanish

2) Under Principles of the method Sentence 2 This goal has never changed, nor has the structure of the method used by the group, though the books in current use have been updated to reflect modern language usage

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The goal has never changed, nor has the structure of the method within the books published by Callan Method Organisation (CMO), though those in current use have been updated to reflect modern language usage.

Paragraph 2 The group's's course for learners of English

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The CMO course for learners of English

3) Under International spread From 1970, new language schools opened outside the UK teaching with the group's method.

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From 1970 new language schools opened outside the UK teaching with CMO's method.

Change Now hundreds of schools in the UK, …. To By 2020 hundreds of Schools in the UK, …

second paragraph In 2020 the first of the group's school in USA opened in Atlanta

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In 2020 the first Callan school in USA opened etc

(Note to whoever is editing: This School in the USA is actually called Callan School of Languages). Thanks Robert Hercules (talk) 13:34, 16 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]